aldlv's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[X-Onic]

was a little strange

was very unique, i have to accept it, wasn't bad at all, but the guitar sounds a little weird, the first thing that came to my mind was vehicle horns... so is strange
it's really simple, but wasn't bad, i wish it were a lot longer

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for the review.

~X~

[Sp1r1T - Pulse]

pretty nice beat

wow... sounds pretty nice, simple intro but i like later, the beat was nice, lots of changes, and all time it gets better, the middle part was a little quiet, it should continue with the strong it has at the beginning, but anyway the song was nice, you really can feel the 'pulse' of awesomeness it has

Sp1r1T responds:

Thanks :D

I don't think the volume dips, but it could be a weak spot in my Mastering...

[episode 3]

needs more...

was kind of bad, the beginning was kind of cool, the space rhythm was nice, but the hard sounds you add didn't fit at all, the drums didn't fit either, the beat was so much repetitive, if you added more changes to it, and take away that 'truck horn' it would be a lot better

[~Cobalt~]

awesomeness!

such a great beat, i love it... nice instruments, fantastic rhythm, lot of movement, pretty nice changes, but i wish it had more, from 1:40 it gets a little repetitive, the song really have potential but have to add the changes sooner
and it loops pretty well, that's a plus, great work

[avast wkyiylti]

didn't like it...

the loops is... kind of annoying, you use a really high sound for it, the beat wasn't bad at all, but you really exaggerated with the sound, and was very simple, even for a loop, so to improve it the next time, add more different sounds that make it less repetitive and don't exaggerated with the sounds, you wanted to add an annoying sound is cool, but ti doesn't really have to 'kill you ear' for real

[SRD - Commutersville]

is interesting

nice intro, and has a good rhythm, but the song feel like if where far away, it has potential, it really do, but i can't get appreciated with this static, i feel it was going to destroy my speakers, when i put the volume louder to hear it
hope you find a way to fix the static...

thegreatmorph responds:

thanks, i'm trying, believe me i am!

[Searchlights]

is very nice

was a nice trance song, i think it has all it needs, it has a good rhythm, the instrument selection was nice and all the effects were cool, everything was nice, but it didn't got my atention, i didn't feel it, needs more changes on it because it feels a little repetitive, you make some changes, i know but the changes didn't feel very different from each other

[MeZoni TriZoni]

is pretty great

nice start, directly to the song, has a nice rhythm what really make you want to jump the chair and dance around... all the effects are nice, the changes you add make me think that you were changing in time, getting beck to past, then a few year later ad then back again, it was a nice touch
i have to say the song is very long, was nice but i got a little tired of it at 3 min...
but when you add the girl voice was nice, it get your attention again, so was pretty awesome

GlueR responds:

Thanks for the review! Well, that's sort of what I was doing. I was mainly trying to mix styles together. I think it worked to some extend. There is a possibility that I will do an entire song as a "dance "cover to our other song (the female lyrics in the end), called "Ode to beer". But I'll have to get round to start it first.... :-)

[The Dust of Destiny [GW]]

is pretty good

has a pretty nice intro, that really gets your attention for the rest of the song, nice drums adding, they are very calm, maybe sweet at some point, has a nice calm & quiet rhythm that makes you to feel 'free', like getting liberated, i enjoy it very much

gamerworld14 responds:

Wow, thank you very much for this review. I really appreciate how you took time to review more than one of the songs I have. Also thanks for the favorite :D

Yeah, for the beginning, all I did was reverse a loop I found online and then i added some effects and reverb and stuff to it. Thanks again for the review!

Your Fellow Newgrounder,
-gamerworld14

[Intake Part I]

is a nice one

i like those 'space' effects, the rhythm was nice, and had a good different style, i feel the beginning a little simple, but later the song feel more 'complete', i like a lot more the guitar and the space effect, so when you leave the space sounds a lot if felt kind of weird, but even like that the song was pretty good
it has a few static when the some instrument enter, that's something you may fix

NeverHundred responds:

Yeah, preety much you take a choras or pad synth and you bend it, preferably but not nessecarally in melodic and rhythmic way that follows the rest of the song. I used the same technique in later intake songs, and in Skyline March, after a while I sort of stopped using it in my work... but I like it and I should revisit it again in the future.